Tree:
How tall you grow tree,
From ground to sky you grow,
Much to big for me!
Lying in the sun
Thinking over things I've done
Summer has begun
I like both of these Haiku's because they sound right in my head. They also rhyme with a clear message when it is being read. The first one is about a tree that is growing and the second one is about Summer beginning. I think these are good because there is not a deeper meaning in the poem and they rhyme well.
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